1mGTM #1 - Above the fold

Your above the fold homepage design matters.

Tip: Don’t assume your audience knows what your tool does.

Here’s a comparison and a breakdown of two companies competing. One is doing it right.

Good

Could be better

Let’s dissect the messaging.

The Headline

AI pipeline generation machine

Hook on Product Category

The good:

  • Short.

  • Punchy.

  • You can never go wrong with a Product Category headline hook.

Automate account and contact research with single a prompt

Hook on main Use Case

The could be better:

  • It’s a mouthful.

  • Has a grammar error.

  • Use Cases can be tricky if the audience is not familiar with the Product.

Products in immature or emerging categories are best explained in simple and direct terms. As is the case above, both product compete in AI pipeline automation.

Actively AI headline delivers a clear Product Category definition in only four words - a masterclass!

Seam AI headline is presenting the main Use Case ‘Automate account and contact research’ and a Capability ‘with a single prompt’. The downside? Users without prior knowledge of the Product might struggle to understand the context. What kind of research does the tool provide, what’s a single prompt, do I need a separate prompt for each account, etc.

Key takeaway:

Simplify the message and don’t assume your audience knows your product.

The Subheadline

Actively AI’s subheadline is another good one!

AI agents to help GTM teams 10x outbound efficiency by telling them who to target, when, and what to say — so reps spend their entire day talking to prospects.

Actively AI

It defines the basics of an MVP GTM:

Feature - AI agents

Target audience - GTM teams

Benefit - 10x outbound efficiency

Capabilities - telling them who to target, when and what to say

Outcome - reps spend their entire day talking to prospects

Seam AI doubles down on the main use case.

Research and analyze companies, markets, industries and people at scale. Sync directly to the CRM or outbound tools.

Seam AI

The first sentence is an unnecessary repeat that does not add a lot of information.

Feature - Sync directly to the CRM

Feature in the isolation of benefits and outcomes falls flat on impact delivery.

Which one do you like better?

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